that girl

http://www.loserturdmafia.com/
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an insult to immotion, she moves lustily through space
saying everything she needs to just by laughing in your face
she’s so insular and evil but its’ ceased somehow to matter
theres’ still fellow upon fellow tossing hearts and flowers at ‘er


she’s lucid when she tells you that she likes you on your knees
but she’s wasted when you touch her, her detachments’ a disease
when she trips on things no longer there on mental cruise control
she says that she’s not looking down, she’s dodging rabbit holes


she’s way too real to cop a feel from just the likes of you
and she’ll never give you everything when anything will do
with resigned disdain replacing pain as her form of romance
little wonder she goes under when it’s you her act enchants
art
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Reply #1 from JoeUser Forums Top
I read this article earlier today, and as it looks like I'm stalking you Mig I thought I'll wait till a few other peole leave a comment for you before I do. *sigh* I'm just to impatient, this is fabulous! I'm totally in awe! You paint pictures with words you really do, I think this is my favourite so far, thanks for sharing mig!
Reply #2 from JoeUser Forums Top


thanks so much, sal. poetry comments always mean so much to me, i can't thank you enough. you can stalk me all you want hehe, i really appreciate your contributions


mumsy mig (aka vanessa) XX *smooch*


ps: sal, i doubt anyone else will see this now, so here's a little secret between us chicks: Link
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Reply #3 from JoeUser Forums Top
Mig! That is fantastic, where do I sign up? hehe! Our secret, hehe!
Reply #4 from JoeUser Forums Top


sal, seeing as you ask, you actually know some of those people in that link already ...

vanessa is me, mark is muggaz, and marco is ... unfortunately a potato at the moment ... but we will fix that. aren't we funky ?

ok, go back to that link above, go to the "forums" page and select "register", then choose your username, etc. your confirmation will get emailed back. then post away, just look for muggaz or me or marco

mig XX
Reply #5 from JoeUser Forums Top
You're all completely funky, before I sign up, you sure I'll be welcome?
Reply #6 from JoeUser Forums Top

absolutely ! ... more than welcome

mig XX
Reply #7 from JoeUser Forums Top

btw sal, the site owners' name is jesse, he has a blog on here, i'm sure you'd like his stuff too: Link


mig XX
Reply #8 from JoeUser Forums Top
Thanks mumsy, I shall go and sign up
Reply #9 from JoeUser Forums Top
What a wonderful post, we need more of this. Have a look at the link, will you join the Maxwellians and fight the good fight?
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Reply #10 from JoeUser Forums Top
Mig ( or can I call you Vanessa?) ,I loved this poem..trying not to get too gushy...ah screw it, it was wonderful!!

Oh yeah, and you have the coolest goddamn hair I've ever seen. *jealous.*

Love Dyl xxx
Reply #11 from JoeUser Forums Top
Like those last two lines....very cool rhyme scheme.
Now to check out these pics.

-SuspeckTed
Reply #12 from JoeUser Forums Top

Reply By: Sally jacobs: Thanks mumsy, I shall go and sign up


hi sal !. steve from the ltm told me that he had messaged you to welcome you, i'll pop over and do the same soon


Reply By: Sir Peter Maxwell: What a wonderful post, we need more of this. Have a look at the link, will you join the Maxwellians and fight the good fight?


hello, sir peter. nice to see you . thankyou for the link, i'd love to know what i can do to assist with peace, so i will make certain i read it.


Reply By: DylanZimmerman: Mig ( or can I call you Vanessa?) ,I loved this poem..trying not to get too gushy...ah screw it, it was wonderful!!


thankyou, dyl. that's a great comment, it really is. it sounds like something i would say hehe. it is a total chicky poem, i'm glad you liked it. and of course you can call me vanessa if you want cherie :)


Oh yeah, and you have the coolest goddamn hair I've ever seen. *jealous.*


dyl, (wow, how vain do i look highlighting that bwwww haaaaa !), but anyway thankyou ... i had blonde hair all my life until recently, and nobody in my family much likes the red (in fact, my family actually hate it, and say so), but people who newly meet me say they could never imagine me with fair hair. (the real shame of it being my colour-blind husband, who, seeing only a limited colour spectrum, calls it "dogshit brown"). so you can see why i'm pleased you liked it hehe


Reply By: Suspeckted: Like those last two lines....very cool rhyme scheme. Now to check out these pics.


thanks, suspeckted. (btw, i noticed you have 2 new poems i'm yet to read, but i'm on my way ) ... i always appreciate your comments. as for checking out the photos, i have a small warning for you ... my (in real life) best friend marco (aka notsohighlyevolved), yesterday took great pleasure in informing me that, in his opinion (be it ever so jaded), the photo of me on the ltm website makes me look like a porn star.

understandably, i did not think this was good news, and i followed the link myself, and, to my horror, not only is he right, the entire page in fact looks like a cover for a dodgy backroom b-grade porn movie.

my quote says "excuse me, does this smell like choloform to you ?", steve's makes him sound like he needs gender reassignment, chrissy p says "i'll **** your face", gary looks like marilyn manson, mark (who is our own dear muggaz, btw), is so completely the flynt-esque director in that canvas chair and sunnies ... i could go on, but i'm scaring myself.

needless to say suspeckted, if you survive that experience, then you may consider yourself invited to join the ltm.

(that goes for you too dyl, and of course you also sir peter. i sort of hid this link and stuff on purpose. i get strangely shy about it or something, but i figured only the people that read my poetry would find it, and i'm glad you did)


mig XXX
Reply #13 from JoeUser Forums Top
understandably, i did not think this was good news, and i followed the link myself, and, to my horror, not only is he right, the entire page in fact looks like a cover for a dodgy backroom b-grade porn movie.


Ahhhhhhhh Miggy....

you forget said link includes a picture of me... which, by virtue... if that page is going to be associated with any porn movie, it would be nothing but grade A top quality!!!

And i am not sure how Jesse would feel being classed as no more than a dodgy B grade porn stud!!!

for shame Miggy!!!

BAM!!!
Reply #14 from JoeUser Forums Top

Reply By: Muggaz: Ahhhhhhhh Miggy....you forget said link includes a picture of me


i did not forget, i was in fact most careful to make sure i incriminated you. look: quote: "mark (who is our own dear muggaz, btw), is so completely the flynt-esque director in that canvas chair and sunnies ..."


... And i am not sure how Jesse would feel being classed as no more than a dodgy B grade porn stud!!!


i am. jesse would absolutely adore being classed as a dodgy b-grade porn stud. anyway, you're the one that called him that. i didn't mention his pic at all ... or the word stud. so, you're saying you think jesse is a stud muggy ?

because of course, if you are, i utterly agree hehe


mig XX
Reply #15 from JoeUser Forums Top
Unrequited love is indeed the pits.
Reply #16 from JoeUser Forums Top


Reply By: stevendedalus: Unrequited love is indeed the pits.


it surely is, stevendedalus. in order to be loved by jesse, one must actually err, be jesse, i think. still, he has yet to encounter the full force of the phenomenon that is the mugman


mig XX
Reply #17 from JoeUser Forums Top
Jesse knows I love him... there will be no more talk of our forbidden relationship here...

and MIGGY I understand now... I am directing the porn, so that is why it is B grade, whereas, If i were staring, it would be A grade...

It all makes perfect sense.

BAM!!!
Reply #18 from JoeUser Forums Top

Reply By: Muggaz ... Jesse knows I love him... there will be no more talk of our forbidden relationship here...and MIGGY I understand now... I am directing the porn, so that is why it is B grade, whereas, If i were staring, it would be A grade


... staring ? it was after all moi that marco blamed for looking like a porn actress ... so what exactly is it that you plan to be staring AT, muggy ? hmm ? hehe ok, ok, i know you meant starring, but it was such a freudian slip that i just had to !

and keep your hands off my jesse, you floozy !. i saw him first


mig XX
Reply #19 from JoeUser Forums Top
What the hell are you sickos doing abusing the sexual naivety and obvious physical deformities of someone like myself in your sleaze productions. If i wasn't a potato i would complain to the RSPCA...or something.

In case you didn't pick up on it -

Marco
Reply #20 from JoeUser Forums Top
Oh how you make me laugh Miggy...

Indeed.

BAM!!!
Reply #21 from JoeUser Forums Top
Reply By: notsohighlyevolved What the hell are you sickos doing abusing the sexual naivety and obvious physical deformities of someone like myself in your sleaze productions. If i wasn't a potato i would complain to the RSPCA...or something


it's not my fault you're a potato. well, ok, it is, but you should have given me a photo when i asked for one. hehe


Reply By: Muggaz: Oh how you make me laugh Miggy...


thanks muggy. i crack myself up too


mig XX
Reply #22 from JoeUser Forums Top
heheeh.... potato